 | Review waiting, please be patient.
This may take 6 weeks or more, since drafts are reviewed in no specific order. There are 1,251 pending submissions waiting for review.
Where to get help
How to improve a draft
You can also browse Wikipedia:Featured articles and Wikipedia:Good articles to find examples of Wikipedia's best writing on topics similar to your proposed article. Improving your odds of a speedy review To improve your odds of a faster review, tag your draft with relevant WikiProject tags using the button below. This will let reviewers know a new draft has been submitted in their area of interest. For instance, if you wrote about a female astronomer, you would want to add the Biography, Astronomy, and Women scientists tags. Editor resources
Reviewer tools
|
| Submission declined on 8 October 2024 by Significa liberdade (talk). This submission appears to be taken from https://www.seishinryu.net/AbbeSensei.htm. Wikipedia cannot accept material copied from elsewhere, unless it explicitly and verifiably has been released to the world under a suitably free and compatible copyright license or into the public domain and is written in an acceptable tone—this includes material that you own the copyright to. You should attribute the content of a draft to outside sources, using citations, but copying and pasting or closely paraphrasing sources is not acceptable. The entire draft should be written using your own words and structure.
Where to get help
How to improve a draft
You can also browse Wikipedia:Featured articles and Wikipedia:Good articles to find examples of Wikipedia's best writing on topics similar to your proposed article. Improving your odds of a speedy review To improve your odds of a faster review, tag your draft with relevant WikiProject tags using the button below. This will let reviewers know a new draft has been submitted in their area of interest. For instance, if you wrote about a female astronomer, you would want to add the Biography, Astronomy, and Women scientists tags. Editor resources
This draft has been resubmitted and is currently awaiting re-review. |  |
This submission has now been cleaned of the above-noted copyright violation and its history redacted by an administrator to remove the infringement. If re-submitted (and subsequent additions do not reintroduce copyright problems), the content may be assessed on other grounds.| Submission declined on 22 August 2024 by CFA (talk). This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines for sports persons and athletes). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia. Declined by CFA 3 months ago. | |
Comment: Wikipedia cannot be used as a source. Theroadislong (talk) 07:31, 15 September 2024 (UTC)
Tomio Otani | |
|---|---|
| Born | 8 September 1939 |
| Died | 8 June 1990 (aged 50) |
| Occupation | Japanese martial arts instructor |
| Father | Masutaro Otani |
Tomio "Tommy" Otani (8 September 1939 - 8 June 1990) was a Japanese master swordsman,[1] kendo master and the first national Coach to the British Kendo Council.[2][3] He was one of the pioneers of kendo in Britain as the leading student of Kenshiro Abbe.[4] Tomio was descibed as one of the world's top exponents of martial arts.[5] He was a master of multiple other martial arts, including iaido, iaijutsu, aikido, kobudo and grew up learning judo[6] and was also the founder of the Yodokan philosophy. Tomio Otani is the brother of Robin Otani and the son of Masutaro Otani.[6]
Biography
editTomio Otani was born in London in 1939 as the eldest son of judo master Masutaro Otani.[7][8] Growing up, Tomio learnt judo from his father.[9] At 15 Tomio began learning Kendo from Kenshiro Abbe and became his leading kendo student.[4] Tomio was a follower of Abbe's Kyūshindō philosophy and founded his own Yodokan philosophy. Tomio Otani defined Kyūshindō as "the accumulation of effort in a steady motion about the radius and center of gravity."[10] He then became a teacher of kendo, the bayonet arts and other budo to many students.[11][12] He was also a master of aikido but never took a grading.[13]
Tomio was awarded his 3rd Dan in 1969[4] and eventually reached 5th dan.[14] Students said, regarding his kendo: "Tomio was so fast that when we had competition, he would hit you several times with the shinai while you were thinking about hitting him."[13] At the beginning of 1990, Tomio's health started to deteriorate and he was diagnosed with stomach cancer. Tomio Otani died on 8 June 1990.[6]
References
edit- ^ "Tenshin Ryu - Club website for Iaido and Iaijutsu". www.tenshin-ryu.co.uk. Retrieved 2024-08-29.
- ^ Ellis, Henry (2005-11-10). "Recollections of the Early Days of Aikido in Great Britain". Fight Times Magazine. Retrieved 2024-08-29.
- ^ "The Aikido Biography of Sensei Henry Ellis". www.streetdirectory.com. Retrieved 2024-08-29.
- ^ a b c "Abbe Sensei". www.seishinryu.net. Retrieved 2024-08-29.
- ^ "Friday 06 June 1986 newspaper". Atherstone News and Herald. 6 June 1986. p. 9.
- ^ a b c "Otani Tomio Master Swordsman tribute page". tenshin-ryu.co.uk. Retrieved 2024-08-21.
- ^ "Otani". Wrestling Heritage. 2023-08-06. Retrieved 2024-08-29.
- ^ Rashid, Abdul; Ellis, Henry (2020-08-25). The founding of Jujutsu, Judo & Aikido in the United Kingdom. Abdul Rashid. p. 259. ISBN 979-8-6752-3321-2.
- ^ "Kendo Roots". kendoinfo.net. 2008-07-14. Retrieved 2024-08-29.
- ^ "Kyushindo Martial Arts Association - History". www.kyushindo-martial-arts.uk. Retrieved 2024-08-29.
- ^ "Truth of the Early History of Aikido in Britain". www.aikido.karoo.net. Retrieved 2024-08-29.
- ^ "Basingstoke Traditional Aikido Club | True Lineage". www.basingstoketraditionalaikidoclub.co.uk. Retrieved 2024-08-29.
- ^ a b Ellis, Henry (2013-05-02). "The Budo Masters". USAdojo.com. Retrieved 2024-08-29.
- ^ "Shaolingsrilanka". shaolinsrilanka.com. Retrieved 2024-08-29.