Removal of Devon Welsh and Jaime Brooks from relationships category

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That section of Grimes biography serves as advertisements for Devon Welsh and Jaime Brooks personal off-site projects. Wikipedia is not an advertising site.

why were my edits undone?

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I made edits today with good intentions of improving this page. I am a student editor with no COI to Grimes. These were my edits https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Grimes&oldid=1176612150, where I was basically cleaning up what was already there, and removing info that didn't adhere to BLP. Then a flurry of activity happened on the main article page and this talk page, and my edits were all undone in the process. Also, activity was erased on this page. I hope to get this page into a neutral place, as a GA article. I saw another editor ask for

but then it was removed, and I'm not sure if an Admin did get to help. Would an Admin please review and offer feedback and suggestions to improve the article?

I am a student editor and would like to improve this page through WikiProject Women in Green Good Article Edit-a-thon, however I'm not sure if that will help or if there is just too much going on here that is beyond my level. Admins, what do you think? LWu22 (talk) 01:56, 23 September 2023 (UTC)Reply

@LWu22: Thank you for your edits. I too hope we can get this article to GA status some day. I did a huge revert today because it was getting messy so I reverted the article back to a revision before the edit war. That's why your edits were removed. I am aware of this and I will try to restore your edits as soon as I can. Bowling is life (talk) 02:50, 23 September 2023 (UTC)Reply
@LWu22: I restored most of your changes. This edit: [1] I just made is a mix of your revision and the way it was before your revision. Thank you for your help with improving the article. Bowling is life (talk) 03:33, 23 September 2023 (UTC)Reply
Thank you for checking this and your encouragement @Bowling is life
I'm going to continue to try to work on improving this article and nominate it for a Good Article Review to get more critical feedback. LWu22 (talk) 20:15, 27 October 2023 (UTC)Reply

South African-Canadian-American businessman Elon Musk

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Is it possible to change from South African-American businessman Elon Musk to South African-Canadian-American businessman Elon Musk? Let me know if possible. Thanks. FireDragonValo (talk) 19:33, 15 May 2024 (UTC)Reply

First paragraph AI generated & Inaccurate

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Hi, I noticed the first paragraph seemed strange and checked it through ZeroGPT to find it was AI generated. This, as far as I can tell, doesn't violate wikipedia's policy, were it not for the fact that it's inaccurate. Grime's has stated in interviews (such as the Pitchfork video "Grimes Breaks Down Her Albums, From Geidi Primes to Miss Anthropocene") and on radio shows such as KEXP that her lyrics do not have any distinct meaning. Perhaps someone should rewrite this. 82.15.96.193 (talk) 11:19, 29 October 2024 (UTC)Reply