Talk:Japanese aircraft carrier Taiyō

Latest comment: 7 years ago by Parsecboy in topic Suggestions

Merge discussion not here

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Please discuss the merge proposal at Talk:Kasuga Maru, not here. D O N D E groovily Talk to me 23:28, 9 December 2011 (UTC)Reply

GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 12:10, 13 April 2017 (UTC)Reply

Criteria

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GA Criteria

GA Criteria:

  • 1
    1.a  Y
    1.b  Y
  • 2
    2.a  Y
    2.b  Y
    2.c  Y
    2.d  Y
  • 3
    3.a  Y
    3.b  Y
  • 4
    4.a  Y
  • 5
    5.a  Y
  • 6
    6.a  Y
    6.b  Y
  • No DAB links  Y
  • No dead links  Y
  • No copyvio  Y

Suggestions

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  • "The ship torpedoed twice by American submarines with negligible to moderate damage before she was sunk in mid-1944 with heavy loss of life. Probably should "the ship was torpedoed twice by American submarines, with negligible to moderate damage, before she was sunk in mid-1944 with heavy loss of life."
    • Looks like somebody already added the missing "was", and I don't think the commas are necessary there.
  • @Sturmvogel 66: That's all my suggestions. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 21:14, 13 April 2017 (UTC)Reply