Talk:Kalamunda, Western Australia

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I think that the stub tag can be removed now. --Spook 15:19, 18 February 2006 (UTC)

Just been fleshing the article out a bit. Ethnicity interests me, I have a sense that there are other groups up there.. Need to string it all together a bit more smoothly, and give a better sense of the contrast between the flat-land (to the west) and the hills. Also like to mention the small railway trails and a bit of history-with-names-of-characters, and finally thinking about a way of talking about bush fire readiness (a happier approach to the story that otherwise might be titled extreme-bushfire-risk). And make mention of any other peculiar industries (walnuts?), and not forgetting the fireworks factory at Carmel that memorably exploded a few years ago.. Tban 05:51, 23 June 2006 (UTC)

I am rewriting this article from scratch here. Auroranorth 14:08, 15 October 2007 (UTC)

Since nobody's taken objection to the rewrite, I'll add the article to the mainspace when it's finished. This current one on the mainspace is out of date, anyway. Auroranorth (!) 05:58, 14 November 2007 (UTC)

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