Talk:Leonard Lomell

Latest comment: 3 years ago by Qflib in topic "the parents of three adult daughters"?
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"the parents of three adult daughters"?

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Under the heading "After the war", the third paragraph reads "Leonard and Charlotte were the parents of three adult daughters." I presume the editor means to say that Leonard and Charlotte had three daughters, all of whom reached adulthood, or something like that. I might suggest that this be changed to "Leonard and Charlotte Lomell were the parents of three daughters." (Referring to them as just "Leonard and Charlotte" diverges from the convention used in the rest of the article, in which he is referred to by his surname.) Any objections? Bricology (talk) 07:45, 10 August 2019 (UTC)Reply

Makes sense to me, I'll change it. It's okay to make this sort of change yourself as well. KeeYou Flib (talk) 15:54, 21 July 2021 (UTC)Reply