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  This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 5 September 2019 and 4 December 2019. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Thestrongestonehere. Peer reviewers: Addimontgomery, Snapplerocks.

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Overall, I thought the article was very informative. It provided a lot of detailed information about your director. I particularly enjoyed the Films subheading where you described the different films the director directed. Although, there are three suggestions I have. First, under the Films subheading, there are lots of sentences missing citations. Two, I suggest putting the subheading Personal Life either with the heading Early life and Education or right below it to allow for a better flow to the article. Three, you do not have a filmography chart.Addimontgomery (talk) 01:42, 4 November 2019 (UTC)Reply