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Santeria isn't solely Cuban
edit"Santeria" is also the name used by Puerto Ricans for their religion. I have no reason to believe that they learned santeria from Cubans. E A (talk) 12:42, 17 May 2020 (UTC)
- Many Cubans have moved to Puerto Rico over the years, especially since the Cuban Revolution, so that may explain why the term transferred from one island to another, either to describe imported Cuban practices, practices that developed in Puerto Rico itself, or a mix of both. Midnightblueowl (talk) 08:45, 19 May 2020 (UTC)
To be more precise, "santería" is a general term. It is also used in the Colombia/Venezuela region. However, in addition to this it also can be applied specifically to regla de Ocha/Lucumí. Thus, there is ambiguity. Cruxador (talk) 21:18, 25 August 2021 (UTC)
- Presumably, the appearance of the term (which arose in Cuba in the 1930s) in Columbia and Venezuela is due to the substantial numbers of Cuban migrants who have moved to those regions, especially following the Cuban Revolution. Midnightblueowl (talk) 21:28, 25 August 2021 (UTC)
- It could be, however this is speculative. At least, I have been told anecdotally that the term is in general usage so it seems to me equally or more likely that it arrived there by ordinary linguistic means to describe the same general phenomenon of syncretizing other religious figures with saints - it can be generally used in this way, not necessarily specific to the orisha faith, across the Spanish-speaking world. It is not, after all, a very non-obvious grammatical construction. However, this usage is in my perception less common and falling out of favor within the last century compared to more specific description of the Santería to which this article refers. In any case, the boundaries of what the more specific label fit are quite fuzzy. It's a difficult matter to address unambiguously. Cruxador (talk) 21:59, 25 August 2021 (UTC)
GA Review
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Reviewer: Karaeng Matoaya (talk · contribs) 10:52, 20 July 2020 (UTC)
This is a truly impressive piece of writing on a fascinating topic, so first of all I'd like to thank you for the surpassing work that has clearly gone into the article. I will be reviewing the article for the next few hours.--Karaeng Matoaya (talk) 10:52, 20 July 2020 (UTC)
- Many thanks for taking this review on, Karaeng Matoaya, and for your kind words about the work that went into it. Midnightblueowl (talk) 10:24, 21 July 2020 (UTC)
Criteria 1: Well-written
editLead, definitions, beliefs
edit- The adjective for the Yoruba is usually given as "Yoruba", the form I am personally used to, but in four non-quoted instances as "Yoruban" (including in the lead). This might be better if consistent.
- I agree; "Yoruba" is the more common term. I've changed every instance of "Yoruban" to "Yoruba" except in the one case where it is a direct quote. Midnightblueowl (talk) 10:42, 21 July 2020 (UTC)
An initiatory tradition, Santería's members usually meet in the homes of santeros or santeras to venerate specific oricha at altars set up for that purpose.
This sentence is a little unclear. What is the initiatory tradition being mentioned here?
- You're right. This could be clearer. I think the best thing, at least for now, is just to remove "An initiatory tradition" here. Midnightblueowl (talk) 10:42, 21 July 2020 (UTC)
Santería uses the Lucumí language, which is derived from Yoruba, for ritual purposes.
I think this sentence could work better at the end of the second paragraph, because it intervenes between two sentences that both explicitly discuss the oricha and which might flow better if directly connected. Alternately, the transition between the previous sentence and this one could be improved by e.g. "The Lucumi language, which is derived from Yoruba, is used in these communications and other ritual purposes."
- I agree that it would work better at the end of the paragraph, so have moved it there. Midnightblueowl (talk) 10:42, 21 July 2020 (UTC)
After the Cuban War of Independence resulted in a newly independent Cuban state, the constitution enshrined freedom of religion.
This would be better contextualized if the fact that the Spaniards enforced a state religion was mentioned explicitly in the preceding sentence.
- You're right. I've changed the previous sentence so that it hopefully achieves this. Midnightblueowl (talk) 12:48, 21 July 2020 (UTC)
Santería has drawn elements from Spiritism since the late nineteenth century;[20] the tradition is flexible and eclectic,[21] and lacks any strict orthodoxy.
What's the purpose of the semicolon here and not a period? In fact, I'd personally prefer combining the first part of this sentence with the preceding one: "or practising the religion alongside Hinduism,[18] or Spiritism, which Santería has drawn elements from since the late nineteenth century."
- I've rewritten and restructured much of this section. Midnightblueowl (talk) 12:48, 21 July 2020 (UTC)
An alternative term for an initiate is a babalocha or babaloricha if male and an iyalocha or iyaloricha if female
Are the meanings of these terms known?
- They derive from Yoruba words that roughly mean "father-deity" and "mother-deity". I've added this into the article at this juncture. Midnightblueowl (talk) 12:48, 21 July 2020 (UTC)
- The second paragraph of the "Definition" section combines discussion of Santeria's status as an Afro-Cuban religion and its flexibility and lack of orthodoxy, while the subsequent paragraph is all about other Afro-Cuban religions. Is there a reason that the discussion of Santeria as one Afro-Cuban religion among many couldn't be combined into a single paragraph or two directly connected paragraphs, while the second half of the second paragraph about Santeria's lack of codification is spun off as its own paragraph, perhaps at the end of the section? Just my two cents, but I think the flow of the text could be clearer that way.
- I've played around with the structure here, drawing on your comments; take a look and let me know what you think. Midnightblueowl (talk) 12:48, 21 July 2020 (UTC)
- I'd personally prefer it if the paragraph beginning
Santería is an Afro-Cuban religion
and the one beginningAlthough Santería is the best known of the Afro-Cuban religions
were directly connected. As it stands, my impression is thatA flexible and eclectic tradition,[17] Santería lacks any strict orthodoxy.[18] Many of its practitioners also consider themselves to be Roman Catholics,[19] and some adherents have practiced it alongside Hinduism,[20] Spiritism,[21] or have characterised themselves as Jewish.[22]
is a bit intrusive to the flow of the text. As its flexibility is something quite important to the nature of Santeria, I'd like the passage to be either further up (as the second paragraph) or further down (at the end), to better highlight it in the section.
- I see you point. I've moved the paragraph in question further up, so it comes second in this section. Midnightblueowl (talk) 13:34, 24 July 2020 (UTC)
- I'd personally prefer it if the paragraph beginning
Oricha are identified as each having their own caminos ("roads"),[59] a concept that several scholars of religion have equated with that of the Hindu concept of avatars.
I'm still not completely sure what a camino is—this should probably be defined directly in the article.
- Most scholars whose work I have read simply gloss this as "avatar", in this way drawing parallels with Hindu theological ideas. Mason does however also call them "manifestations" which I can add into the article. I hope that makes things clearer, but I can have another go if you feel this needs to be clarified further for the reader. We could perhaps talk about the oricha taking "different forms" or something? Midnightblueowl (talk) 13:10, 21 July 2020 (UTC)
- That would be more easily understood, yes.
- If Oyá is a guerror, is there a reason she's not in the paragraph with her comrades Eleguá and Ogun, while Yemaja (a non-warrior as I understand it) is?
- I could be wrong about this, but as I understand it, Oyá may be a warrior figure but is not actually one of the guerroros per se. According to Fernandez Olmos and Paravsini-Gebert (p. 58), the guerreros are a triumvirate consisting of Elegua, Ogun, and Ochosi. Both Hagedorn (p. 247) and Mason (p. 128), conversely, add Osun to that list. The latter two scholars are specialists in Santería specifically, so I think their list is more reliable. I'll edit the article to make this all a bit clearer. Midnightblueowl (talk) 13:03, 21 July 2020 (UTC)
Some of the oricha are regarded as being antagonistic to one another; Chango and Ogun are for instance described as being enemies
Very interesting that iron and fire are enemies, but also makes quite a lot of sense. Not related to the GA review, just something I found interesting.the Holy Infant of Atocha, who is viewed as Christ as a child
Isn't the Holy Infant a literal Catholic depiction of the child Jesus? In that case "which depicts" may be preferable to "who is viewed as".
- I've amended this to "the Holy Infant of Atocha, a depiction of Christ as a child". Midnightblueowl (talk) 10:42, 21 July 2020 (UTC)
Practitioners refer to this oricha as being that which "rules the head" of an individual
Why not "something that" instead of "being that which"?
- I've changed it to "as one which", which I think is nice and simple. Midnightblueowl (talk) 12:04, 21 July 2020 (UTC)
- This might be a pet peeve, but the verb "believe" ("practitioners believe", "adherents believe") is very common even when already clear from context that this is a belief.
- I've trimmed back the use of this term in the article, especially in some of those sections where it has been heavily used. Midnightblueowl (talk) 12:17, 21 July 2020 (UTC)
Especially propitiated are those members of the dead who are deemed to be ancestors;[49] these ancestors are consulted at all ceremonies.[107] Practitioners believe that when a creyente dies, they too become an ancestor.
Is the definition of an ancestor in Santeria a genealogical ancestor, or a deceased creyente, or both? For example, could a creyente have a non-Cuban, non-santeros grandparent as an ancestor?
- I'm not sure if there are clear-cut rules here. The instances I have encountered (in the academic literature) refer to deceased creyente being "ancestors" but I don't know if this is the only way ancestors are conceptualised. Midnightblueowl (talk) 12:24, 24 July 2020 (UTC)
- I've done a little bit more digging and found a passage in the glossary of Hagedorn's book which indicates that an ancestor can be either based on ritual or blood. I'll add this into the article. Midnightblueowl (talk) 12:29, 24 July 2020 (UTC)
carved, figurative cane
"Figurative" in what sense?
- In the sense of sometimes having faces on them. I'll try and make this clearer. Midnightblueowl (talk) 10:42, 21 July 2020 (UTC)
Santería teaches that through offerings and prayers, individuals can help some of their unevolved spirits to become evolved.
Again very interesting.Many roles were traditionally considered off-limits to homosexual males,[129] however there are many gay men operating as priests in the religion,[130] as well as some lesbian priestesses.
This sentence is a run-on.
- I've rewritten and re-structured several sentences here. Midnightblueowl (talk) 12:48, 21 July 2020 (UTC)
There is a stereotype among Cubans and Cuban Americans that all Santería priests are gay men, although this is not true.
If there are traditionally many limits to homosexual men in Santeria, how did this stereotype develop in the first place?
- If I understand correctly, (and I'm re-checking the sources cited here), there have never been restrictions on homosexual men being santeros, and that is a role that many gay men have come to fill. The restrictions are on gay men becoming babalawos or bata drum players. I'll try and make this all clearer in the article. Midnightblueowl (talk) 12:04, 21 July 2020 (UTC)
Practices
edit- Is Lucumi a full language, or fossilized ritual formulas derived from Yoruba? The article on Lucumi language seems to support the latter interpretation.
- I believe that the latter is a fairer assessment. Do you think this needs to be made clearer in the article? Midnightblueowl (talk) 12:46, 24 July 2020 (UTC)
- Yes—I don't think the term "Lucumi language" should be used without direct qualification to this effect in the sentence
For ritual purposes, the Lucumi language, which derives from the Yoruba language, is often used in Santería.
and perhaps also in the lead.--Karaeng Matoaya (talk) 12:59, 24 July 2020 (UTC)
- I've added a sentence that directly quotes Wirtz which somewhat captures this point, I feel. Midnightblueowl (talk) 12:49, 31 July 2020 (UTC)
- Yes—I don't think the term "Lucumi language" should be used without direct qualification to this effect in the sentence
at this point, they may still be referred to as an aleyo ("stranger")
When do they stop being called aleyo? Is this after the iyaworaje?
- I assume so, but I've actually removed this sentence from the article as I don't think that it offers the reader any crucial information at this juncture and is likely to cause confusion. Midnightblueowl (talk) 12:46, 24 July 2020 (UTC)
in omiero, a type of sacred water that has been infused with various herbs.
Per the above section ("When a sacrifice is made, some of the blood may be mixed with herbs and added to that from previous years. This liquid is called omiero, and is regarded as the most powerful liquid in Santería"), I was under the impression that omiero was mostly blood?
- It's definitely mostly water with herbs, although blood may be added to it (in small quantities, I believe). I was unsure quite how to introduce omiero into the article; do you think the explanation of it is sufficient or should I try to expand on the subject? Midnightblueowl (talk) 12:50, 24 July 2020 (UTC)
- I've created a new article on Omiero too, which might help the situation. Midnightblueowl (talk) 12:55, 24 July 2020 (UTC)
- That's perfect, and the current rewrite IMO has successfully done away with any confusion readers might have about what omiero is.--Karaeng Matoaya (talk) 12:59, 24 July 2020 (UTC)
Initiates often receive the necklaces of the five most powerful and popular oricha.
Which oricha are these?
- Unfortunately Mason, who is the citation used here, doesn't actually list them. Midnightblueowl (talk) 12:46, 24 July 2020 (UTC)
- I don't have a source so this would be original research but I believe it should normally be Obatalá, Changó, Ochún, Eleguá, and Yemaya. It is possible that this varies according to Ilé, as many things do. Cruxador (talk) 21:26, 25 August 2021 (UTC)
As a santero gains further initiations within the Santería system
Shouldn't this be "As a santero undergoes more initiation ceremonies"? I'm not sure if initiations are something you gain.
- Good idea. Changed. Midnightblueowl (talk) 11:18, 21 July 2020 (UTC)
objects from their padrino that represents the warriors: iron tools to represent Ogún; an iron bow and arrow to represent Ochosi; and an iron or silver chalice surmounted by a rooster to represent Osún
What about Elegua?
- de la Torre, who is being cited in reference to these items, does not actually state what object represents Elegua. My guess would be that it is one of the cement heads with shells stuck into it, as those represent Elegua, but I do not know that as a fact. Midnightblueowl (talk) 12:46, 24 July 2020 (UTC)
The term toque refers to both the verb tocar ("to play") as well as the noun toque ("rhythm").
Could there be a clearer expression than "refer to" here? Perhaps "invokes" or "is linked to"?
- I've gone with "links to" here. Midnightblueowl (talk) 11:18, 21 July 2020 (UTC)
For ceremonial purposes, these drums must be made from wood, with no metal structural elements; adding metal elements could offend Chango, who is associated with wooden artefacts, because of their association with his enemy, Ogun.
Is Ogun not offended by the wood?
- I presume not. It's a little off-topic, but there are various instances of supernatural beings being scared off by certain metals (in West European folklore, for instance, fairies are often driven off by iron) and yet I can't think of any instances of supernatural entities having a similar response to wood. Midnightblueowl (talk) 11:18, 21 July 2020 (UTC)
Aside from the use of herbs and divination, Santería traditional healing rituals include animal sacrifice, offerings, altar building, music, dance, and possession trance.
Was divination in the context of healing mentioned earlier?
- I don't believe so (although I could be wrong). In these contexts, divination is often used to ascertain the cause of the ailment and the appropriate course of action to alleviate it. Midnightblueowl (talk) 11:18, 21 July 2020 (UTC)
- If so, it might be better to mention divination somewhere earlier in the paragraph. Since the first half of the paragraph directly addresses the use of herbs in divination,
Aside from the use of herbs and divination
suggests to the reader that divination in healing rituals was also mentioned earlier, which could be a bit confusing as the reader thinks that they've missed something in the text.
- For now, I've taken "and divination" out of this paragraph. However, I'm currently reading Wedel's book on Santería Healing and there should be some useful stuff in there on the use of divination in Santería, so once I've identified the appropriate pages I'll add a sentence or two on the subject to this section. Midnightblueowl (talk) 13:43, 24 July 2020 (UTC)
- I have added the appropriate sentences to this section, discussing the role of divination in healing (citing Wedel). Midnightblueowl (talk) 12:30, 31 July 2020 (UTC)
- If so, it might be better to mention divination somewhere earlier in the paragraph. Since the first half of the paragraph directly addresses the use of herbs in divination,
History, demographics, reception
edit- The final paragraph on Spanish Cuba regarding eventual emancipation might belong further up in the section, and in a more abbreviated form, e.g. "Enslaved Africans first arrived in Cuba in 1511, and Cuba continued to receive new slaves until at least 1860. Full emancipation of the slaves only occurred on the island in 1886."
- I'm not sure on this one. I tried to keep this section roughly chronological, although it does jump back and forth a bit on thematic grounds. I'm hoping to alter this section with more specific, historical sourcing in the next few months so it may undergo some further alterations at that point. Midnightblueowl (talk) 12:01, 24 July 2020 (UTC)
- My suggestion here was really largely informed by WP:SIZE—it's the one paragraph that's only tangentially connected to the religion, so I thought it would be worth trimming and merging with the first paragraph for the sake of reducing article length.
- I've gone back and merged the last paragraph into the first, as you suggest. Midnightblueowl (talk) 11:52, 31 July 2020 (UTC)
- Is the "Abakwá group" a casa de santo?
- It's more a secret society. I see that I've spelt it differently at different points of the article so I'll make sure that I standardise it as "Abakuá" (our article on the topic needs some work). Midnightblueowl (talk) 10:52, 21 July 2020 (UTC)
The final decades of the 19th century had also seen growing interest in Spiritism, a religion based on the ideas of French writer Allan Kardec, which in Cuba proved particularly popular among the white peasantry, the Creole class, and the small urban middle-class.
The impact of Spiritism on Santeria should be explicitly mentioned here.
- A very good point. I've now added a sentence that does so. Midnightblueowl (talk) 11:03, 21 July 2020 (UTC)
Mexican practitioners tried to keep in contact with their Cuban co-religionists via mail and phone
Why the past tense here?
- No particular reason; I suppose because the cited source was published in 2007 and the information in it may not be current. Nevertheless I've changed this to "have tried" here, which I think improves the sentence. Midnightblueowl (talk) 11:03, 21 July 2020 (UTC)
- Reception: Nothing to say here, all good.
Criteria 2: Verifiable
edit- The article is impressively well referenced in all respects. I've cross-checked two of the very many source—Ayerinde 2007 and Holbraad 2005—and all instances were accurately cited.
Criteria 3: Broad
edit- The article is a on the long side per WP:SIZE. Eventually I think it could use trimming. With just a bit more meat, Toque de santo and Santería initiation could each be forked to their own articles and the "practices" section could be trimmed down accordingly. But it's not a block to GA status, mind.
- At the same time, I think Santeria's position among other religions could be better contextualized if there was a paragraph in the "Definition" section with a few examples of how Santeria differs from other Yoruba-based diaspora religions, as well as specific examples of differences between Santeria practice and current Yoruba practice in Nigeria, or perhaps if contrasts between conventional Santeria and Yoruba practices were mentioned more frequently in passing. While reading, at times I had the impression that Santeria is effectively Yoruba religion just transplanted across the Atlantic, which I assume is wrong.
- Additionally, I would prefer it if there was maybe a sentence or two on how Santería interacts with race in Cuba. Quite far into the article I thought that it was an African-exclusive religion, which isn't the case—given the salience of race in the Anglosphere I think it's important noting explicitly relatively early on.
- I see your point. This is something that I have already tried to facilitate; the fourth paragraph of the lede for instance mentions that people of various ethnicities practice Santería and I tried to highlight race and ethnicity-based issues at several points in the article (notably "Morality, ethics, and gender roles", "History" and "Demographics") although I can appreciate that we could have more on this issue at certain points. (I think we could certainly have a bit more on the crossover of Santería and black nationalism, especially in the U.S.). A lot of this depends on the Reliable Sources, however, and what they choose to discuss. I think it highly likely, given the current socio-political climate in the Anglosphere, that we will see more academic research appear on race and Santería in the next decade or so. Once that is published, we could certainly bring any findings from that work into the article. Midnightblueowl (talk) 10:49, 21 July 2020 (UTC)
Other criteria and conclusion
edit- Neutral.
- Stable.
- No image problems.
So once my concerns above are addressed, this should be an easy pass.--Karaeng Matoaya (talk) 14:24, 20 July 2020 (UTC)
- I'll try and deal with the last few points in the next few days. Midnightblueowl (talk) 13:14, 21 July 2020 (UTC)
I believe that I've dealt with every point you made Karaeng Matoaya, but let me know if anything else comes to mind. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on this article; I hope that you felt that it was worthwhile! Midnightblueowl (talk) 12:52, 31 July 2020 (UTC)
- @Midnightblueowl: This is a pass. Congratulations, and thank you—as mentioned, this is a fascinating article on a fascinating subject.
- Just for further reference, I think the article as it stands might focus a bit too much on descriptions of Santeria practices and maybe needs more info on contextualization (with the African Yoruba religion and with other Afro-Caribbean religions especially). Again, I'd counsel forking some of the material in "Practices" and maybe even "Beliefs" into new articles and trimming down this one in line with summary style; the article is currently longer than the Christianity and Islam articles!--Karaeng Matoaya (talk) 07:54, 1 August 2020 (UTC)
The article seems ridden with spelling errors, starting by the shocking "oricha" instead of "Orisha" (which is the title of the article on the subject in Wikipedia), continuing with "Chango" instead of "Changó", "Yemaja" instead of "Yemayá", "Lucumi" instead of "Lucumí" (which is a very common last name where I live) and "Ochun" instead of "Ochún" or "Oxum".
All those names are stressed in the last syllable, the digrams "sh" and "ch" have a very different pronunciation in Spanish with "ch" being noticeably harder, and, to add insult to injury, the letter "j" in "Yemaja" is pronounced like Spanish "y" but only in English because in Spanish those are two very different sounds.
Sometimes it says "Santería" and in other occasions it says "Santeria".
It hurts my Spanish eyes and it goes against the pronunciation in Spanish and the lore around the subject which includes a myriad of salsa songs I am used to sing since I was a kid.
A native speaker could correct this but it requires copy/paste through a word processor to correct the many errors ("guerror" instead of "guerrero" in this talk being egregious).Ciroa (talk) 02:21, 25 August 2021 (UTC)
Citation errors
editThere are a couple of citation errors:
203. Bascom 1950, p. 65; Mason 2002, p. 71; Wedel 2007b, p. 114. Harv error: link from CITEREFWedel2007b doesn't point to any citation.
416.Brandon 1992, pp. 76, 77-78; Fernández Olmos & Paravisini-Gebert 2011, p. 42. Harv error: link from CITEREFBrandon1992 doesn't point to any citation.
--Graham Beards (talk) 10:04, 12 May 2021 (UTC)
- Thanks Graham Beards; I've now fixed those two errors. Midnightblueowl (talk) 11:35, 12 May 2021 (UTC)
Errors in spelling
editI am familiar with Santería in Cali, where I live and in Sao Paulo, which I have visited.
The spelling "oricha" is original, I have never seen it, it should be orishá or at least orichá, being way, way, way more common the first one, except in articles written by non-native speakers of Spanish.
The Wikipedia article says Orisha.
I started to correct spelling but was unable when I realized that the word "oricha" is spelled like that 116 times, my gosh.
The same goes for "babaloricha" which I have seen spelled as "babalorisha".
I highly doubt the person writing the article has ever heard the salsa songs devoted to santería where the letters "sh" are invariably used instead of the much more strong pronunciation "ch" which I have never heard used in santería rites as both letters or digrams "sh" and "ch" have a very different pronunciation in Spanish.
Also Yemaja seems an English translation and a poor one or at least very original of Yemayá.
Ogun is spelt Ogún and Chango is Changó, Babalu is Babalú, is not Lucumi but Lucumí, which is a very common last name in Cali.
Most names in Santería are stressed in the last syllable and that is what the accent means.
There is mention of "guerror" in this Talk while one imagines it means to say "guerrero".
The word "Santeria" is used sometimes while most of the time says "Santería", which is the correct spelling.Ciroa (talk) 02:09, 25 August 2021 (UTC)
- Santería in Sao Paolo? Do you instead mean Candomblé, a related tradition of Brazilian origin? As for many of the examples you say are incorrectly spelled, are you referring to the Talk Page or the article itself? Because in the article, we do use spellings like "Santería," "Changó" and "Lucumí" throughout. Also, "oricha" is the standard spelling for the deities of Cuban Santería in the English-language academic and specialist literature on this topic, whose example we follow. Midnightblueowl (talk) 09:45, 25 August 2021 (UTC)
- Rather than errors in spelling, there aren't universally accepted spellings in the first place. It seems that the article generally leans towards the most distinctively Cuban variants, which is probably the best that can be done in this decade. Although, "guerror" seems very strange to me too since that one should indeed have a correct form. But, that's because it's a Spanish word and not a Lucumí word. Cruxador (talk) 21:33, 25 August 2021 (UTC)
Insufficient allowance for variation
editIt seems to me that the great degree to which most details can vary by Ilé (which this article translates as "casa") would not be obvious to a reader who isn't already familiar with this matter. This is true in little details, for two examples: the article says their are 16 main orisha, according to me if I picked a number it would be 15 and I have two different guesses who the 16th might be. This is something that can vary and it's normal for it to do so because the line between major and minor orisha is very vague. There is also the issue of gender. It is said that the orishas can be male or female, but there are also those which are genderless (Olokún is not, in my experience, normally depicted as humanoid and can be said to be without path/camino) or dual gender (Obatalá is said to have an equal number of male and female paths, and is entirely male as well as entirely female, containing the full wisdom of both genders) or otherwise not binary. It also applies to practitioners currently, the article states as though it were objective truth that women are equally important or more important in Santería, and specifically can hold the highest positions. Although this is true of Regla de Ocha, it doesn't account for the fact that in many Ilé, Ocha is very integrated with Ifá, and therefore a babalawo (a role only for males) can be considered more important. In addition, all specific references to practices could vary, although I didn't notice anything to which I'm aware of an obvious exception. Finally, even the big things can change. For example, the relative emphasis on the orishas compared to the ancestors can be very different. Cruxador (talk) 21:51, 25 August 2021 (UTC)
- In its current form, this article does try to stress that there is a great deal of variation in how Santería is practiced. In the opening paragraph, for example, we state that "much diversity exists among practitioners," and in the "Definitions" section immediately following the lead we also highlight that "Santería is a flexible and eclectic tradition, with considerable variation in how it is practiced." On that count, we are certainly not trying to conceal this diversity of practice. (In the "Divination" section we also discuss the gendered restrictions of the babalawo).
- It is important to remember that the nature of Wikipedia means that we are constrained by what the Reliable Sources say, and cannot add anything that represents Original Research. There are instances where this may mean that we make a statement that is true of many Ilé/casa, but not all. This is an issue that we inevitably face when putting together Wikipedia articles on any religion that is not heavily regulated and controlled by a central leadership. In those instances where you have concerns that we are presenting a generalisation that does not apply to all adherents, perhaps we could add in some words like "typically" or "often" so as to try and capture some of that variation? Midnightblueowl (talk) 09:37, 26 August 2021 (UTC)
Christmas and Santa in modern Santeria
editI'm a Nigerian born and bred in Nigeria. I have always been attracted to non European identity and I have embraced Santeria. I have been mentally unstable before I sincerely adopted Santeria. As a Nigerian in Nigeria, I'm a sort of authority on Santeria and so I am sure that starting from 2023, Santafest (first December to fourth January every year) is a Santeria holiday season during when there will be a lot icing Santa (saint) associated with Elegua or Esu who will bring gifts for children. This is not the Christian Christmas. Santa is a key element in Santeria ✅ (Santa Remi (talk) 11:49, 20 December 2023 (UTC))
This whole article is bogus
editI'm initiated into the religion. First off, you've destroyed my attempt at migrating this page to the religion's formal name "Regla de Ocha" to remediate the fact that "Santería" is a derogatory term.
Also, dozens of details throughout the article are just plain wrong, and citing 2-3 sources (that are academically known to be fiction) shouldn't be the only "credible" sources here. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Vxla (talk • contribs) 13:52, 11 October 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you for bringing your concerns to the Talk Page. Please bear in mind that this is a WP:Featured Article and so considerable time and attention has already been directed towards it. Changes, especially major ones, should be discussed at the Talk Page first and not unilaterally imposed on the article.
- I have sympathies with your first point. Regla de Ocha is the name used for the religion by most of its initiates, some of whom do not like the term Santería. However, we are bound by the rules and regulations of Wikipedia. One of these is WP:COMMONNAME. There, it states that "Wikipedia does not necessarily use the subject's official name as an article title; it generally prefers the name that is most commonly used (as determined by its prevalence in a significant majority of independent, reliable, English-language sources)." Regla de Ocha may be something like an official name of the religion, but it is certainly not its commonly recognisable name in society at large. One just has to browse the list of academic studies on the subject to see that the vast majority refer to it as Santería. Very few use either Regla de Ocha or Lucumí. On that front, I cannot see Wikipedia editors achieving consensus to change the article's name until the vast majority of academic and media sources begin switching to Regla de Ocha first.
- On your second point, this article is extensively sourced to high-quality, WP:Reliable Sources published by academic specialists. If you believe that certain claims made in the article are incorrect, do raise your concerns here at the Talk Page. However, please bear in mind that you will have to introduce Reliable Sources to support your claims, and that means other high-quality publications by academics. It does not mean your own personal experience as an initiate, because "Wikipedia articles must not contain original research." I appreciate that this may be frustrating for you, but it is how Wikipedia operates. Midnightblueowl (talk) 09:34, 14 October 2024 (UTC)