Template:Did you know nominations/St Matthew's Church, Burnley

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The result was: promoted by PumpkinSky talk 22:29, 11 September 2012 (UTC)

St Matthew's Church, Burnley

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• ... that St Matthew's Church (pictured) in Burnley, Lancashire, England, burnt down on Christmas Day in 1927, and was subsequently rebuilt?

• Comment: Not a self-nom. --PFHLai (talk) 14:07, 1 September 2012 (UTC)

Created/expanded by Peter I. Vardy (talk). Nominated by PFHLai (talk) at 14:07, 1 September 2012 (UTC)

• Length, date, hook's ref verified. No apparent paraphrasing issues. All paragraphs have citations. Interesting hook. --Rosiestep (talk) 04:04, 3 September 2012 (UTC)

• There is some confusion in the article about the year that the organ was replaced (1920 is before the fire). Also, the hook fact about Christmas Day in 1927 requires a citation no later than the end of the sentence containing that fact. I've taken the liberty of moving "was" in the hook from before "burnt" to before "subsequently"; where it had been carried the implication of arson, rather than what happened, which is said to be an electrical fire, and presumably accidental.

A thought: since what is pictured is the rebuilt church, perhaps it would make more sense (assuming the picture is used) to flip the clauses: England, was rebuilt after it burnt down on Christmas Day in 1927? BlueMoonset (talk) 05:34, 3 September 2012 (UTC)

Hmmm.... frankly, I don't get the implication of arson. I prefer having the active verb on the main event of the hook -- getting burnt down on such a day! May be we can leave out the rebuilding part. It's obviously rebuilt if we show a colour photograph of the church. Anyway, I'll ask the author about the organ. Thanks. --PFHLai (talk) 13:32, 3 September 2012 (UTC)

Changed the punct from period to semicolon for in-line citation. --Rosiestep (talk) 15:57, 3 September 2012 (UTC)

The organ, built originally for another church in 1920 was moved to this church in 1933. Added a few words to clarify this. --Peter I. Vardy (talk) 08:07, 4 September 2012 (UTC)

• Restoring approval for hook as currently constituted; hook fact now supported by source at end of (extended) sentence; organ dates have been clarified. Rest of article review per Rosiestep's original approval. BlueMoonset (talk) 17:05, 8 September 2012 (UTC)

BlueMoonset, the version you proposed at 05:34, 3 September 2012 (UTC) should be okay, too. Thanks. --PFHLai (talk) 21:21, 9 September 2012 (UTC)